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Critiques
"She wears a coat of color
Loved by some, feared by others
She's immortalized in young men's eyes"
This always makes me think and I hope it will make you, too.
You deeply impress with the perfect use of stocks in your works commonly. As we can see in this deviation, you used a black and white stock, in fact the fancy window appearing in the background. You incorporated the colours so well in the overall picture that it is not remarkable and actually fits together with the other elements.
The colours themselves are overwhelming, furthermore they match along with the topic given by the game and maintain the posture of Triss.
As far as I am concerned the intensity of the lighting is too vigorous or rather not strong enough on her face. The fall of light appears unrealistic, especially by comparison with the left elbow. Also the quality of the pillows should be modulated, on some parts they are too sharp, particular below the falling light. I still think the execution of these quality circumstances is marvellous.
The only thing in the picture that I would dislodge is the little piece next to the right side of the curtain. It disturbs the amicable atmosphere.
However to be honest, this work is, as it manifests, accomplished.
Greetz
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